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Tyden's golf journal - Sergio Garcia
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Sergio's Surge to Number One. He has changed his swing since then but has still not won a major championship. In 2008 he won the Vardon trophy, and the Byron Nelson Award. He is expected to retire in a few years but he wont quit without a fight for a Major. Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview. Create a free website.
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Call to adventure - Tyden's golf journal
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Every golfer dreams of this moment. Staring down the expanse of flawless, manicured fairway and hoping that they can just do their job of making a par. Winning is everything. Going into the last hole one up and just needing a par to win. The putt rolled true and flat, but at the last minute turned hard left hitting the lip, and dropped. My best round ever; a 76. I went over and congratulated him on shooting a great round, but still breathing heavily from the pressure of the putt. Create a free website.
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WINTER ACTIVITY #1 - Tyden's golf journal
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Sounds like a blast, I like this enry, you're a great writer Tyden! Great entry keep up the good work! Create a free website. Photo used under Creative Commons from Aussie Assault.
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Winter post #2 - Tyden's golf journal
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Wow we sure are getting a lot of snow. Tyden you are a really good writer. At least your dog enjoying the snow. Great entry keep up the good work! Create a free website. Photo used under Creative Commons from Aussie Assault.
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Helper/amulet - Tyden's golf journal
http://wilsonfenn2016.weebly.com/classes-blogs/helperamulet
I have no idea. Nice job keeping the reader in suspense. Interesting post, though a little more description on what the item looks like would be nice. Great post, I also think you could add a little more description. I agree with William. Also this piece was very interesting, one of your best. Nice job really interesting. I like the style of writing. Keep up the exelent world! Create a free website. Photo used under Creative Commons from Aussie Assault.
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Overcoming challenges - Tyden's golf journal
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This is excellent writing: it just needs to be formatted to match the "Fitz-Style" journal entry guidelines. Read the rubric again. I think it will help to make this good piece, great! Nice writing let's have a good baseball season! Great post Tyden, great description and thoughtful writing throughout this peice. Great writing, but maybe you coud split it up bit! I love the theme of new things can be challenging. This is one of your better posts. Great job Tyden! This is AWESOME Tyden!
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Μψ $θπg - Tyden's golf journal
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The Wrestling room - Tyden's golf journal
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Dinner - Tyden's golf journal
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Just a short one. Tonight for dinner, we went to a place in downtown Winchester called the black horse tavern. We arrived 10 minutes before my dad and brother and just ordered drinks and appetizers. Once they arrived, we talked for a while, and then ordered. When our food came, we all stuffed ourselves and once we were finished with our food we paid the bill, left and went home for dessert. I would ad more description, otherwise great job. Create a free website.